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نوراااان
17-10-2011, 02:47 PM
ازيكم يابنات اكيد كلكم عارفين ان ان شاء الله الخطوط السعوديه نازله قريب يعنى ان شاء الله قولو مثلا بعد شهر ونص الامتحان اللى هتعملوه ان شاء الله فى المعهد البريطانى لازمله تحضير لانه يخص البيزنيس انجلش وطبعا الناس اللى هتقدر تذاكر وتستوعبه وتفهمه هتجتاز الامتحان واللى مش هتقدر تستوعب المعلومات عنه يبقا ارجوكم يابنات تروحو تاخدو كورس انجلش فى اى معهد يكون كويس عن business english

how to write report in business english
how to write letter in business english
how to write message

لان الامتحان بيبقا عباره عن ياااما تكتبى رساله اعتذار انك مش هتحضرى مثلا اجتماع او هتكبتى تقرير عن الموظفين الكويسن مثلا او هتكتبى تعليمات الشركه للموظفين الجداد وده طبعا هيحتاج انكم تحفظو مصطلحات تجاريه انجليزيه اتفقنا؟؟
وده صيغة الامتحان
http://www.bulats.org/docs/writing_en.pdf (http://www.bulats.org/docs/writing_en.pdf)

يعنى الامتحان هيجيى قطعتين ياااما تكتبى ريبورت بانواعه
ياااما رساله بانواعها من تاكيد حجز زاو حجز . او عمل اوردر . او اعتذار رسمى .اعتذار غير رسمى

report يتكون من
Terms of Reference
Procedure
Findings
Conclusions
Recommendations
A report is divided into four areas:

Terms of Reference- This section gives background information on the reason for the report. It usually includes the person requesting the report.
Procedure- The procedure provides the exact steps taken and methods used for the report.
Findings- The findings point out discoveries made during the course of the report investigation.
Conclusions- The conclusions provide logical conclusions based on the findings.
Recommendations- The recommendations state actions that the writer of the report feels need to be taken based on the findings and conclusions.

Reports should be concise and factual. Opinions are given in the "conclusions" section. However, these opinions should be based on facts presented in the "findings".
Use simple tenses (usually the present simple) to express facts.
Use the imperative form (Discuss the possibility ..., Give priority ..., etc.) in the "recommendations" section as these apply to the company
as a whole
ده اللى على اساسه هتكتبى ريبورت ناجح قوى والكلام ده معناه ايه بقا
معناه ان الريبورت بيتكون من 4 مجموعات
رقم واحد سبب كتابت الريبورت ومعلومات عن الريبورت يعنى مثلا
انا اكتب الريبورت ده بناء على طلب المدير منى
وبعد كده الاجرائات اللى انت اتبعتها فى حل المشكله او تنفيذ الطلب اللى طلبه منك المدير
3 فقره النتائج من الريبورت 4 فقره التوصيات
يعنى مثلا لو جالك يقلك المدير بيقلك ان الشركه اللى بعتولها المنتجات قالت ان المنتجات منتهيه الصلاحيه والمدير بيطلب منك تعمل تقرير عن الموضوع ده يبقا هتبدا الريبورت تكتب سبب كتابتك للريوبرت وهتقول الاجرائات اللى انت اخدتها للبحث عن المشكله والنتايجج اللى ترتبت على كده وبعد كده هتقول للمدير رايك فى المشكله ودى هتبقا التوصيات
ده مثال لريبورت محلول
.Reports: Example Report

Terms of Reference
Margaret Anderson, Director of Personnel has requested this report on employee benefits satisfaction. The report was to be submitted to her by 28 June.
Procedure
A representative selection of 15% of all employees were interviewed in the period between April 1st and April 15th concerning:

Overall satisfaction with our current benefits package
Problems encountered when dealing with the personnel department
Suggestions for the improvement of communication policies
Problems encountered when dealing with our HMO
Findings

Employees were generally satisfied with the current benefits package.
Some problems were encountered when requesting vacation due to what is perceived as long approval waiting periods.
Older employees repeatedly had problems with HMO prescription drugs procedures.
Employees between the ages of 22 and 30 report few problems with HMO.
Most employees complain about the lack of dental insurance in our benefits package.
The most common suggestion for improvement was for the ability to process benefits requests online.
Conclusions

Older employees, those over 50, are having serious problems with our HMO's ability to provide prescription drugs.
Our benefits request system needs to be revised as most complaints concerning in-house processing.
Improvements need to take place in personnel department response time.
Information technology improvements should be considered as employees become more technologically savvy.
Recommendations

Meet with HMO representatives to discuss the serious nature of complaints concerning prescription drug benefits for older employees.
Give priority to vacation request response time as employees need faster approval in order to be able to plan their vacations.
Take no special actions for the benefits package of younger employees.
Discuss the possibility of adding an online benefits requests system to our company Intranet
اما عن الايميل والرساله :
Dear Personnel Director,
Dear Sir or Madam: (use if you don't know who you are writing to)
Dear Dr, Mr, Mrs, Miss or Ms Smith: (use if you know who you are writing to, and have a formal relationship with - VERY IMPORTANT use Ms for women unless asked to use Mrs or Miss)
Dear Frank: (use if the person is a close business contact or friend)
The Reference
With reference to your advertisement in the Times, your letter of 23 rd March,
your phone call today,
Thank you for your letter of March 5 th .
The Reason for Writing
I am writing to inquire about
apologize for
confirm

Requesting
Could you possibly?
I would be grateful if you could

Agreeing to Requests
I would be delighted to

Giving Bad News
Unfortunately
I am afraid that

Enclosing Documents
I am enclosing
Please find enclosed
Enclosed you will find

Closing Remarks
Thank you for your help Please contact us again if we can help in any way.
there are any problems.
you have any questions.
Reference to Future Contact
I look forward to ...
hearing from you soon.
meeting you next Tuesday.
seeing you next Thursday.
The Finish
Yours faithfully, (If you don't know the name of the person you're writing to)
Yours sincerely, (If you know the name of the person you're writing to)
Best wishes,
Best regards, (If the person is a close business contact or friend)
Sample Letter
Here is a sample letter using some of these forms:
Ken's Cheese House
34 Chatley Avenue
Seattle, WA 98765
Tel:
Fax:
Email: kenny@cheese.com
October 23, 2006
Fred Flintstone
Sales Manager
Cheese Specialists Inc.
456 Rubble Road
Rockville, IL

Dear Mr Flintstone:
With reference to our telephone conversation today, I am writing to confirm your order for: 120 x Cheddar Deluxe Ref. No. 856
The order will be shipped within three days via UPS and should arrive at your store in about 10 days.
Please contact us again if we can help in any way.
Yours sincerely,

ده موقع فيه كلمات احفظو اللى تقدرو عليها منه دى مصطلحات تجاريه
http://www.learn-english-today.com/business-english/A-business-english-contents.html (http://www.learn-english-today.com/business-english/A-business-english-contents.html)

اغتنمو الفرصه وروحو خدو كورس انجليزى تجارى فى اى مركز محترم كده وان شاء الله هيعلمووكم كتابة الريبورتات والرسايل والاميلات التجاريه وهتجتازو الامتحان ان شاء الله وهتشتغلو وهتحققو كل احلامكم
فى مركز بيرلتز او القوات المسلحه او اى مركز يكون رخيص وكويس كمان
ربنا معاكم يارب

hend bakeer
17-10-2011, 09:04 PM
شكرا يا نوران على مجهودك ........ يعنى الامتحان كله بيكون قائم على الجزء ده بس

نوراااان
17-10-2011, 10:45 PM
ايوا يااحببتى بيبقا عباره عن كتابة تقرير او رساله
رسالة اعتذار
او رسالة تسويق منتج
او رسالة تهنئه بعيد ميلاد لمديرك
او تقرير عن سوء عمل الموظفين
او تقرير عن الشركه عمتا
او تقرير عن مشكله ماا فى الشركه
او تقرير عن مميزات ومرتبات الشركه
او رسالة ترحيب للموظفين الجداد
لابد من وضع بدايه ونهايه للتقارير والرسايل
يعنى الرسايل تقريبا كلها بتنتهى
yours sincerely
وبتبتدى بالعنوان وdear mr or mrs or miss

والتقارير بتنتهى باامضاء شخصى والتاريخ

نوراااان
17-10-2011, 10:49 PM
بتمنالكم كل خير يابنات ربنا معاكم

mariam khalil
18-10-2011, 03:43 AM
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نوراااان
18-10-2011, 04:06 PM
ايوا ياحبيبتى معلومه مؤكده انهم ان شاء الله نازلين كمان شهر من دلوقتى ذاكرى بقا ياااما روحى خدى كورس بينزنس انجلش واتعلمى ازاى تكتبى ريبورتات ومسجات وليترز تجاريه

نوراااان
18-10-2011, 04:16 PM
Why write Business Letters?

There are many reasons why you may need to write business letters or other correspondence:

to persuade
to inform
to request
to express thanks
to remind
to recommend
to apologize
to congratulate
to reject a proposal or offer
to introduce a person or policy
to invite or welcome
to follow up

بعض من الرسايل التجاريه :
Requesting Informatio

54 Oxford Road, Skagnes SK3 4RG
Tel: 0223 123 4567 Fax: 0223 765 4321
Email: info@dreamtimemovies.com.ukDate
Lingua Services Galactic Ltd
69 Milk Street
LONDON SW7 6AW
Dear Sirs
Translation Brochure
I should be grateful if you would send us your brochure and price list about your translation services.
We are currently developing our sales literature and web sites and are interested in translating these into five languages apart from English.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Andrea Philips
Andrea Philips
Marketing Manager
<H1>Letter of Invitation

PJ Party
22 Yew Street, Cambridge, Ontario
Tel: 416-223-8900
April 7th, 20--
Dear Valued Customer:
Our records show that you have been a customer of PJ Party Inc. since our grand opening last year. We would like to thank you for your business by inviting you to our preferred customer Spring Extravaganza this Saturday.
Saturday's sales event is by invitation only. All of our stock, including pajamas and bedding will be marked down from 50-80% off.* Doors open at 9:00 AM sharp. Complimentary coffee and donuts will be served. Public admission will commence at noon.
In addition, please accept the enclosed $10 gift certificate to use with your purchase of $75 or more.
We look forward to seeing you at PJ's on Saturday. Please bring this invitation with you and present it at the door.
Sincerely,
Linda Lane

</H1>Dreamtime Movies Universal Ltd
54 Oxford Road, Skagnes SK3 4RG
Tel: 0223 123 4567 Fax: 0223 765 4321
Email: info@dreamtimemovies.com.uk
Date
Lingua Services Galactic Ltd
69 Milk Street
LONDON SW7 6AW
Dear Sirs
Translation Brochure
I should be grateful if you would send us your brochure and price list about your translation services.
We are currently developing our sales literature and web sites and are interested in translating these into five languages apart from English.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
Andrea Philips
Andrea Philips
Marketing Manager

نوراااان
18-10-2011, 04:23 PM
Important Points to Remember


Email is much less formal than a written letter. Emails are usually short and concise.
If you are writing to someone you don't know, a simple "Hello" is adequate. Using a salutation such as "Dear Mr Smith," is too formal.
When writing to someone you know well, feel free to write as if you are speaking to the person.
Use abbreviated verb forms (He's, We're, He'd, etc.)
Include a telephone number to the signature of the email. This will give the recipient the chance to telephone if necessary.
It is not necessary to include your email address as the recipient can just reply to the email.
When replying eliminate all the information that is not necessary. Only leave the sections of text that are related to your reply. This will save your reader time when reading your email

نوراااان
18-10-2011, 04:27 PM
Are you having trouble ..Business Letter Writing: Sales Letters

.
This is why it is important to have ...
At X, we have the skills and experience to ...
May we stop by and offer you a FREE estimate of how much it would cost to ...
If so, give us a call at X and set up and appointment with one of your friendly operators.
Example Letter
Document Makers
2398 Red Street
Salem, MA 34588


March 10, 2001

Thomas R. Smith
Drivers Co.
3489 Greene Ave.
Olympia, WA 98502
Dear Mr. Smith:
Are you having trouble getting your important documents formatted correctly? If you are like most business owners, you have trouble finding the time to economically produce good-looking documents. This is why it is important to have a specialist take care of your most important documents.
At Documents Makers, we have the skills and experience to come in and help you make the best possible impression. May we stop by and offer you a FREE estimate of how much it would cost to get your documents looking great? If so, give us a call at and set up and appointment with one of your friendly operators.
Sincerely,
(signature here)
Richard Brown
President
RB/sp

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For more examples of various business letters, use this guide to different types of business letters (http://esl.about.com/od/businessenglishwriting/a/Types-Of-Business-Letters.htm) to learn more types of business letters.

caty cat
18-10-2011, 07:46 PM
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hend bakeer
18-10-2011, 09:35 PM
ايوا يااحببتى بيبقا عباره عن كتابة تقرير او رساله
رسالة اعتذار
او رسالة تسويق منتج
او رسالة تهنئه بعيد ميلاد لمديرك
او تقرير عن سوء عمل الموظفين
او تقرير عن الشركه عمتا
او تقرير عن مشكله ماا فى الشركه
او تقرير عن مميزات ومرتبات الشركه
او رسالة ترحيب للموظفين الجداد
لابد من وضع بدايه ونهايه للتقارير والرسايل
يعنى الرسايل تقريبا كلها بتنتهى
yours sincerely
وبتبتدى بالعنوان وdear mr or mrs or miss

والتقارير بتنتهى باامضاء شخصى والتاريخ

متشكرة جدا يا جمييييييل وان شاء الله خير باذن الله

mariam khalil
19-10-2011, 08:17 AM
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terms of reference w ta7teeeeh el klaaaaam bta3oooo 3la 7asb el report tb3nnn w b3d kidaaa

proceders w ta7tee el klaam bta3oooo

walaaa

bktb el report kolo 3ala b3doo miin 3"er el 3naweeen dee>????

نوراااان
19-10-2011, 03:44 PM
لا لا لا بصى ياحبيبتى دلوقتى لو اطلب منك انك تكتبى تقرير عن الشركه مثلا فى موظفين جداد وصلو الشركه الكلام اللى فوق ده يعنى تقسيم الفقرات بتفهمك ازاى ترتبى الريبورت يعنى
مش هتكتبى terms of reference
والكلام ده
هتبتدى الريبورت بكتابت خلفيه بسيطه عن الموضوع فى خلال مثلا 3 سطور وبعدين تكتبى الاجرائات اللى انتى اتبعتيها عشان تحلى المشكله او اللى اتبعتيها فى الموضوع اللى طلبه منك المدير وبعد كده النتائج وبعد كده بتقولى رايك فى الموضوع وتمضى تحت
يعنى مثلا اطلب منى اكتب تقرير للطلاب اللى فى كلية تجاره لانهم جايين يتدربو فى الشركه عندى فالمديرقالى اكتب ليهم تقرير اقلهم على المواعيد والمميزات وعن قواعد الشركه
فااانا ابتديت الريبورت وقلت فى بدايته
باسم الشركه والعاملين عليها اود ان ارحب بكم فى شركتنا
مواعيد الشركه من كذا لكذا والاجازاة يوم فى الاسبوع والمميزات كذا وكذا وبعدين ترغى بقا يعنى اكتبى كل اللمميزات اللى ممكن تكون موجوده فى الشركه من مرتبات وترقيات وبدلات وممكن تعملى ناصحه وتشجعيهم انهم لو اثبتو كفائتهم هيشتغلو فى الشركه بمرتب عالى مثلا بعد التدريب وتنهى التقرير
الرساله بقا اهم حاجه البدايه والنهايه يعنى تركزى فى البدايه
dear ,mr,mrs ,mis
hello,
النهايه yours faithfully لو بتبعتيها فورمال
yours sincerely لو مش فورمال

نوراااان
19-10-2011, 03:47 PM
ايوا روحى خدى كورس احسنلك هتعدى فيه شهر مثلا مش كتير كام ليفل هو مش ليفل اصل الانجليزى التجارى ده ليه مطلحات تجاريه وتتعلمى ازاى تكتبى التقارير والرسايل التجاريه وكده روحى احسن ليكى

نوراااان
19-10-2011, 03:48 PM
ممكن تاخديه مضغوط او فى البيت تجيبى مدرس يديكى بس يكون شاطر

mariam khalil
19-10-2011, 09:03 PM
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hend bakeer
27-10-2011, 08:42 PM
نوران بعد اذنك تعرفى بنمتحن الامتحان فين ........ انا سمعت وانا بقدم السى فى بيكون معابا الشهادة اجتياز الاختبار

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28-10-2011, 02:59 PM
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hend bakeer
30-10-2011, 11:09 AM
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noni85
30-10-2011, 08:00 PM
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